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jonneymendoza Goldmember 3,794 posts Likes: 391 Joined Apr 2008 More info | May 15, 2014 11:30 | #1
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atexasphotog Goldmember More info | May 15, 2014 11:39 | #2 Cropped a little too tight on the bottom for my tastes Canon 6D,T3i, Powershot G16| 50mm 1.8II|100-400mm F4.5-5.6L|24-105 IS F/4 L||16-35mm F/2.8 vIIL|lCanon 1.4x mkII TC|580 EXII |Keeping it all in a KATA Backpack
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OhLook insufferably pedantic. I can live with that. 24,908 posts Gallery: 105 photos Best ofs: 2 Likes: 16337 Joined Dec 2012 Location: California: SF Bay Area More info | May 15, 2014 11:46 | #3 For this kind of subject, because facial expression is so important, I'd prefer sharper focus, to show more detail of skin texture. The lighting also seems too dramatic (harshly one-sided), for the same reason. In other words, I want a better view of the tension and wrinkles that the man's emotion is causing. He doesn't look tight enough around the eyes and mouth. PRONOUN ADVISORY: OhLook is a she. | Comments welcome
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May 15, 2014 16:25 | #4 I wish the bottom of his chin wasn't cut off, I like the rest.
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May 16, 2014 04:14 | #5 Thanks for teh kind responses. i will make sure i shoot a bit wider! Canon 5dmkIII | Canon 85L 1.2 | Sigma 35mm ART 1.4|Canon 16-35mm L 2.8 |Canon 24-70mm L f2.8 | Canon 70-200mm F2.8L MK2 | Canon 430EX MK2 Flickr
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edge100 Goldmember 1,920 posts Likes: 16 Joined Jan 2010 Location: Toronto, Canada More info | May 16, 2014 04:57 | #6 Wider isn't the issue; just pitch the camera forward a bit next time. Street and editorial photography in Toronto, Canada
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May 16, 2014 05:05 | #7 Thanks! Canon 5dmkIII | Canon 85L 1.2 | Sigma 35mm ART 1.4|Canon 16-35mm L 2.8 |Canon 24-70mm L f2.8 | Canon 70-200mm F2.8L MK2 | Canon 430EX MK2 Flickr
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