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May 22, 2014 10:53 |  #1

C&C appreciated.

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May 22, 2014 14:14 |  #2

Not doing much for me, sorry :(. Perhaps the building and trees are demanding more attention than the bridge. Perhaps it's not clear why the bridge is there. I imagine there is a view that would isolate some architectural aspect of the bridge?


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May 22, 2014 14:16 |  #3

Yes, I just added one above this one.




  
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May 22, 2014 14:35 |  #4

There's something about that building and the bridge together that is pleasing. I also like the PP on the first one. Maybe a square crop? Just a suggestion.


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May 23, 2014 00:44 |  #5

Thanks for the suggestion. I ended up cloning out a few things that were distracting on the second pic but think it works better in wide format.




  
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May 23, 2014 04:21 |  #6

I like the replaced second image in your original post a lot more than the others. I think it may be a bit confusing to people to replace images this way, better to add posts or even start a new thread.


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May 23, 2014 14:26 |  #7
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I really like the first image as is. I like the print tone and the detail you achieved here. Nice shot.




  
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May 23, 2014 14:31 |  #8

Dave3222 wrote in post #16922830 (external link)
There's something about that building and the bridge together that is pleasing. I also like the PP on the first one. Maybe a square crop? Just a suggestion.

I like this view better but unfortunately all I see is sadness knowing the history of the bridge.


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May 23, 2014 15:10 |  #9

I think the cars on the lower bridge are a distraction from the intricate beauty of the building and the bridges. I would like to see that shot was a ND filter stopped down about 10 f-stops and shot with a longer exposure to eliminate the vehicles. What and where are the structures? I just love architectural images.


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May 23, 2014 15:21 |  #10

its the Colorado Street Bridge in Pasadena, CA

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May 23, 2014 15:30 |  #11

Yup. I had the same thought as Peeaanuut here. Sad history. Iconic birdge, in a sense. And immediately familiar to anyone who's lived in the LA area.


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May 23, 2014 16:38 |  #12

Thanks for the feedback everyone. I hope to get a night shot when I have a tripod available in a few weeks. Unfortunately, it's rather difficult to get to the place where the first shot was taken.




  
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May 24, 2014 22:56 |  #13

Make sure you get the camera level, shoot RAW and do a lens correction in PP (and may be correct perspective a little more).


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May 25, 2014 12:07 |  #14

Definitely prefer #1 and would love to see it in color although the conversion works very well.


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May 25, 2014 17:16 |  #15

Thanks guys. These were shot raw and pp lens corrections were applied. I am going to reshoot both in the coming weeks so will try a few things differently. Thanks for the feedback.




  
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