Flowers and the Park

Looking for the C&C on these please.

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#1 I'd prefer more isolation from the background, and less bright on her chest - might be able to do some PP for these.

#2 Nice image. A bit over saturated for my tastes, especially the greens. the blue wire looks good. Perhaps brighten the face a bit.

#1 throw away the entire left side (she's too centered) - the brighter area on the left is distracting. Her blouse is way too bright, tone it down - i'd also say the reds are too saturated.

#2 needs straightening, face is too dark (the bright areas at the end of the tunnel are way distracting) the background blows out her face

I really like the 1st shot but the blue tunnel is too overwhelming for me in #2.
I would edit the 1st to emphasize the little girl more and I added a flower to the left for balance.

Thanks for the feedback guys. Here is the attempt based on suggestions.

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the re edits are great,u fixed the blown out distracting back ground in #1.my youngest plays on the same type of playground so i can relate

I like #2 but it has a bit of a tilt (look at the OOF green elements in the background) and it was originally a bit over saturated. The edit is already better but still has the tilt. The kid's face can have a little more light and make sure the skin colour is OK (you get reflections from the surrounding elements (blue) in this case that can effect the true skin colour. So in PP may be some masking and fine tuning.

#1 is not really very special. I would have positioned her slightly further to the left with her body at an angle and even further from the background to improve the bokeh.