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May 23, 2014 20:51 |  #1

A little project I did with Hennesy

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May 24, 2014 00:23 |  #2

I'm confused. The bartender was basically a d*ck and to the customer and then she acted like he was awesome as soon as he stepped behind the bar?? Didn't seem to follow (could be me I guess LOL)

I thought the camera work was pretty good although the shallow DOF before showing the drinks was really distracting. The "sense" of the story was the only thing that really bugged me though. :)


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May 24, 2014 08:09 |  #3

Its way too long. This should be a 30 second commercial and skip the lazy bartender, empty bar, girl on her phone, etc. It would also be better with better facial expressions, better dialog, and a more exciting scene. I would fix the camera shake, spilled drink, and use a lower camera angle for the bottle shot at the end.


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May 24, 2014 08:24 as a reply to  @ sspellman's post |  #4

BORING!:p


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