Thanks for the comments and tips. Both were shot with 24-105 on my 7d2 (I saw the focus issue as well and on my sports shots and have since returned the body as it was in the 30 day window...) Used a soft box about 45 degrees to her stance and about 45 degress above her, probably 5 ft away with canon ex430II fired into it along with an on camera flash bounced. So how best would I position her or lights next time?
Turn her body AWAY from the light by 65-80°, then have her turn her head to face the lens, or even face into the light a bit. Voila: light across the garment and short lighting in two moves.






