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tulsatom Member 73 posts Likes: 1 Joined Feb 2014 More info | May 31, 2014 06:59 | #1 my 9 yr old daughter Image hosted by forum (686649) © tulsatom [SHARE LINK] THIS IS A LOW QUALITY PREVIEW. Please log in to see the good quality stuff.
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KaylaIveigh Senior Member  340 posts Joined Jun 2012 Location: Edmonton, AB More info | May 31, 2014 18:10 | #2 |
texkam "Just let me be a stupid photographer."  1,580 posts Likes: 998 Joined Mar 2012 Location: Olympia, Washington USA More info | May 31, 2014 18:18 | #3 but the crop is all wrong Traditionally speaking, yes. Sometimes artists choose to break the rules. I kinda like it.
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ReservoirDog A Band Apart  More info | May 31, 2014 22:04 | #4 texkam wrote in post #16942953  Traditionally speaking, yes. Sometimes artists choose to break the rules. Yes, but you need a strong understanding of the rules to break the rules, you don't break the rules just to break the rules, there is rules to break the rules ... Patrice
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KaylaIveigh Senior Member 340 posts Joined Jun 2012 Location: Edmonton, AB More info | Jun 01, 2014 13:14 | #5 texkam wrote in post #16942953 Traditionally speaking, yes. Sometimes artists choose to break the rules. I kinda like it. This is breaking the rules in a bad way. Why chop her head in 1/2 with a part of her elbow/arm popping out of the frame. The negative space isn't contributing to the photo in any way. Canon 5D Mark III | Canon 60D | 35mm 1.4 L USM | 85mm 1.8 USM | 70-200mm 2.8 L IS II USM | 600EX-RT Speedlite | Website
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Jun 01, 2014 13:19 | #6 KaylaIveigh wrote in post #16944437 This is breaking the rules in a bad way. Why chop her head in 1/2 with a part of her elbow/arm popping out of the frame. The negative space isn't contributing to the photo in any way. It's a good photo, but it would be stronger if you could see the whole subject. This looks like a mistake that's trying to be saved. If it were mine, I'd go for a much tighter crop in an attempt to make the bottom edge, awkward as it is, look intentional. The background doesn't contribute to the image.
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texkam "Just let me be a stupid photographer." 1,580 posts Likes: 998 Joined Mar 2012 Location: Olympia, Washington USA More info | Jun 01, 2014 13:28 | #7 de gustibus non est disputandum
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ReservoirDog A Band Apart More info | Jun 01, 2014 20:00 | #8 texkam wrote in post #16944472 de gustibus non est disputandum I agree, taste are not arguable, but ... Patrice
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TacCPhotography Senior Member  498 posts Likes: 4 Joined Feb 2012 Location: Scottsdale, AZ More info | Jun 01, 2014 21:58 | #9 Reservoir Dog wrote in post #16943291 Yes, but you need a strong understanding of the rules to break the rules, you don't break the rules just to break the rules, there is rules to break the rules ... As crazy as this sounds he's got a point. I think the picture would be good if not for the crop. When the page first pulled up on my screen I actually refreshed it to make sure it wasn't a computer error
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texkam "Just let me be a stupid photographer." 1,580 posts Likes: 998 Joined Mar 2012 Location: Olympia, Washington USA More info | Jun 02, 2014 01:01 | #10 here it's very strange, even weird it's like the head is chopped and is rolling/sliding down from the shoulder ....... This is breaking the rules in a bad way. Why chop her head in 1/2 with a part of her elbow/arm popping out of the frame. The negative space isn't contributing to the photo in any way. ........ This looks like a mistake that's trying to be saved. ........ The background doesn't contribute to the image. ......... When the page first pulled up on my screen I actually refreshed it to make sure it wasn't a computer error Here's what was said about Boudin, Degas, Cézanne, Guillaumin, Monet, Berthe Morisot, Pissarro, Renoir and Sisley ... (Impressionist artists)
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EastBayGirl Cream of the Crop  More info | Jun 02, 2014 01:10 | #11 I like it, but I would like it if you cropped it just to the right of her. I don't think the space on the right is doing anything for the image. Stina
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Jun 03, 2014 21:57 | #12 ya I should of brought the camera up a lil more but was wanting to get that straight on looking into her eyes feel and the bar that holds that top of the hot tub cover was blocking the bottom of her face and I jhad just barely cropped it out of the image. thanks for the critique thou guys
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DonJuanC79 Member 92 posts Likes: 1 Joined Oct 2009 More info | Jun 06, 2014 15:43 | #13 I agree, the crop is awkward.
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Jun 08, 2014 16:12 | #14 Agree about the crop, looks like only half the image loaded 6D | EF 35 f2 IS | EF 50 f1.4 | EF 85 f1.8 | EF 135 f2.0
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