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Jun 05, 2014 06:07 |  #1

[I am aware of the bottle. lowered it darker as much as it stayed believable, heh]

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Jun 05, 2014 08:00 |  #2

That bottle has got to go.


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Jun 05, 2014 09:34 |  #3

lowered it darker as much as it stayed believable,

It looks like you lowered the exposure on everything in the image. What are you using for processing? Does it haveLayer Masks? (external link)


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Jun 05, 2014 11:17 |  #4

To make a harmony with the voice inside your head: how could you not see that bottle whilst taking the photo !



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Jun 05, 2014 16:01 |  #5

Ignoring the bottle, it's a nice expression. Would love to see a bit more of her hair and some catchlights in her eyes.


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Jun 06, 2014 01:53 |  #6

I see a face floating in the dark. Needs some semblance of a body under it.


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Jun 06, 2014 14:28 |  #7

Yes, that's an excellent smile and intrusive bottle.

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Jun 06, 2014 14:54 |  #8

AZGeorge wrote in post #16955979 (external link)
Yes, that's an excellent smile and intrusive bottle.

Very nicely done edit. Major improvement on the original IMO.


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