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platforminc
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Jun 14, 2014 11:25 |  #1

Hi All,


I noticed some problems with some of the pictures I have been taking, the other day I was at an event and I thought, it makes sense for me to practice my photography skills once more. Now, most of my problems stem from the fact that most of my subjects do not come out sharp in photos, I learnt in the last 4 years one should focus on the eyes etc, that's fine if its one person, but my problem gets worse when taking a group of people, I find that most of the time only one person comes out focused well.

This particular occasion was well lit with ambient light, I still had my flash on though, although pointing upwards.

I will place comments by each of the photos and please let me know what I ought to be doing better. I learnt on this forum that one can change the AF focus points etc, and I do that, but I usually set it to auto, as the manual one is a single red dot and when taking a group photo, who do you focus the red dot on ? So with the auto, when pressing the shutter button half way, the focus point changes, so I press a couple of times until the focus points covers a wider range i.e my subjects near their faces. Is this a flaw or am I doing something incorrectly ?


Thanks in advance.

1)
This was taking with a SLR, however a similar picture with a Samsung S5 phone was better. I know I was backing light, but yet the pictures were not well exposed. Using a lower f stop would blow out the skies, what I wanted was to blur out the Brighton domes, and yet make an impression that the picture was taken in Brighton.

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This was taken with a Samsung S5 phone

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I feel only the subject on the left was well focused on.


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Again the subjects to the left and right are not well focused.

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Only the Male is well exposed.

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Only the baby looks sharp.

Camera: Canon 500D, f1.8 50mm, kit lens, Tamron 17-50 f2.8 VC, 430EX flash, Remote control,Tripod, Cleaning kit.

  
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Jun 14, 2014 12:13 |  #2

If you are shooting more than one person, make sure your DOF is broad enough. You do this by getting a smaller f-stop (higher number). This should help with making sure all eyes are sharp.

Critique:

#1 - under exposed over all, subjects are dead center, lose the coke bottle.

#2 - under exposed on subjects, subjects are dead center

#3 - very nice, subjects seem fairly sharp. Just be aware of elements in the image, hand in mouth, cell phone. great colors in this image!!!!

#4 - maybe a little over exposed, be careful with head on flash. Be aware of things "growing" out of the subjects' heads (crystal thing behind lady on left.

#5 - Great image, may want to try and include baby's feet.

#6 - Same as #5, baby's feet, crop out the arm on right side of the image.


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platforminc
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Jun 14, 2014 18:56 |  #3

Thanks very much for the feedback.
Just what I needed.
Are you saying that AF focus point isn't an issue here ?
Secondly I was taking these photos using Aperture mode and i noticed that if I increased the f stop numbers I.e go from f3.5 to f5.6. The pictures became darker which is understandable as less light reaches the sensor. What can I do in a case light this as I only have my external flash and no studio lighting etc.

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Jun 14, 2014 22:54 |  #4

platforminc wrote in post #16971855 (external link)
Are you saying that AF focus point isn't an issue here ?

The smaller your f-stop # is, the less depth of focus there is.
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Secondly I was taking these photos using Aperture mode and i noticed that if I increased the f stop numbers I.e go from f3.5 to f5.6. The pictures became darker which is understandable as less light reaches the sensor. What can I do in a case light this as I only have my external flash and no studio lighting etc.

You'll have to increase ISO.
Is that "external flash" separate from the camera, or the built in one?
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