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Jun 26, 2014 03:03 |  #1

first - the city and some of it's towers:

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Jun 26, 2014 05:38 |  #2

Really really like the first one


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Jul 06, 2014 21:26 |  #3

I love the second one! I just wish his eyes were a tad brighter and it also distracts me a little bit because just a sliver of his head is cut off, I think I would like it better if you cut off a little more...or none at all. :) Great photos though!!!

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Jul 06, 2014 21:57 |  #4

First one is slightly tilted to the left. Second one, I'd crop a bit more away from the right side to center his face in the frame.


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