Double Ceremony- Chinese and Catholic in the same day

This couple are one of my first bookings, but they booked over a year out, so they were actually our 5th solo wedding. I'm behind on posting photos, these are from last fall.

They had a tea ceremony in the morning, we went to the gardens for some couple pictures, then had a Catholic ceremony and reception afterwards. (LOOOOONG day, but fun!)

I'd love your Comments and Critiques! I love to learn how to improve!

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Weekends must be slower here I'm surprised there weren't any comments yet.

I'll take a crack at it!
#3- could have centered the couple in the window
#4 white balance issue with her dress, his arm on the left looks awkward
#5 could have cropped out people on the left who are distracting
#6 Bridesmaids boquets are all held differently
#7 looks like some motion blur
#8 Hunched over look on the groom- could have gone lower to get more sky

Yes I just critiqued myself- but I needed to hear it!

Most seem underexposed to me and virtually all have WB issues