mac_man Hatchling 5 posts Joined Feb 2006 More info | Feb 15, 2006 13:58 | #1 i went to a local park and just played around, i'm trying to start to get into photography and i forgot my tripod lol i'm using a digital rebel and i was using the stock lense for these please critique, i can use any help i can get
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saravrose "I quit smoking dope" 9,562 posts Likes: 3 Joined Aug 2005 Location: Between here and there More info | Feb 15, 2006 16:54 | #2 the first one is great did you add grain? I would clone out the car in the background on the second.. Great job.. I really like them. Sari. Canon 30D BG_E2 Grip Rebel XT BG-E3 battery grip
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Feb 15, 2006 17:43 | #3 yeah i cheated on the first one...i forgot to say that i PS'd it with the dry brush filter, i'll post the original?
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Feb 15, 2006 18:09 | #4 here's the picture after i took out the car, and a few more
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Streetshooter Senior Member 882 posts Likes: 2 Joined Jan 2005 Location: Phila, Pa. More info | Feb 16, 2006 14:20 | #5 the 1st one almost works.....the tree coming out of her head kinda kills the eye travel.....maybe with less DOF it would have been better.....better luck next time..... Cheers, Don
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ajbalazic Cream of the Crop 5,228 posts Joined Jan 2005 Location: Kitchener, ON, Canada More info | Feb 17, 2006 09:34 | #6 A lot of shots to critique... so I will say that you have an interesting style. I like it. Focus is a little off on some photo's but I like how you get right up close and personal. Alan
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elTwitcho frustrating as .... 1,478 posts Likes: 1 Joined Sep 2005 Location: Toronto More info | Feb 17, 2006 11:13 | #7 It is kind of a bit much to get into critiquing. The first one I think has so much potential but just barely falls short. If you'd seated her a bit to the left to not place her centrally and fill up that portion of the frame better (it's in shadow so it holds little interest compared to the right side) it would have really been excellent. As it is it's certainly a nice shot though Rich
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