Could I have improved this shot? How so? All feedback welcome!
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outofbounds Senior Member 769 posts Likes: 3 Joined Apr 2014 Location: Northwest Ohio More info | Jul 03, 2014 11:56 | #1 Could I have improved this shot? How so? All feedback welcome!
R. Lee
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Stamp Senior Member 680 posts Likes: 3 Joined Sep 2010 Location: SO Indiana More info | Jul 03, 2014 12:23 | #2 Composition isn't bad, imo. It could use about 1/2 stop less exposure, less saturation, and more clarity. 1Ds Mark II, 5D Mark III, Canon AE1, Yashica Electro 35, Mamiya RB67, Yashica 124, some lenses with red rings on them, and some flashey things
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evelakes Goldmember More info | Focus point (s) are on the leafs below , so your rose get's a little out of focus. A camera is a tool for learning how to see without a camera.
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Jul 03, 2014 15:42 | #4 get closer - the rose is too small in this image... the foliage on the right isn't adding to the subject Light L16: http://lightRumors.co
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Jul 03, 2014 16:01 | #5 i like the shot. nice composition.
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outofbounds THREAD STARTER Senior Member 769 posts Likes: 3 Joined Apr 2014 Location: Northwest Ohio More info | Thanks to all for the input. I didn't realize I was in AI servo. Hey, I'm really new to this, with no training whatsoever. That's why I need your opinions!
R. Lee
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AFVisualPhoto Member 61 posts Joined Apr 2014 More info | Jul 04, 2014 00:16 | #7 Permanent banPictures are not loading?
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EightThreeNine Mostly Lurking 18 posts Joined Jul 2014 Location: Somewhere in England More info | Jul 04, 2014 04:12 | #8 Lovely picture, but as others have said, I'd get in closer to the flower and really make a feature of the drops on the petals.
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