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Hatchling

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Jul 09, 2014 19:27 | #1

Just seeing if I can do this. Just a test but take look at this and tell me what you think.

There will be a few more to follow as I have only just started getting into photography.

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Martin Dixon

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Jul 10, 2014 10:50 | #2

The bright greenery on the right is dominating the waterfall - re-compose/crop?

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Hatchling

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Jul 10, 2014 10:56 | #3

Yer I know, it was just a quick mess around in LR. First time using the program for about 20 minutes last night. I'm going to have another play around, it seems like a great program...

I have other photos that I hope to share soon!

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Jul 13, 2014 08:55 | #4

Welcome to POTN, Dan. I like the shot. It looks a bit serene and surreal, which is okay with me.

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Jul 13, 2014 15:57 | #5

Looks good. I like the composition. Nice use of long exposure as well. You're off to a nice start.

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Left Handed Brisket

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Jul 13, 2014 18:59 as a reply to @ CameraMan's post | #6

I like the juxtaposition of bright colored rhododendron and monotone waterfall.

I have this thing where if things are almost symmetrical or almost straight (the line bet the water and land) it kinda bugs me. Kind of an all or nothing thing. I would straighten it up and make sure the waterfall occupies the same amont of space as the rhododendron. Or make it not symmetrical at all.

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