Just starting out in DSLR photography so have a lot to learn. Really happy with this shot of my 4 year old though:
LittleMaiMai by grahameys, on FlickrAny feedback or advice would be appreciated
grahameys Hatchling 5 posts Joined Jul 2014 More info | Jul 28, 2014 12:30 | #1 Just starting out in DSLR photography so have a lot to learn. Really happy with this shot of my 4 year old though: LittleMaiMai by grahameys, on FlickrAny feedback or advice would be appreciated
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ArmandoDiva Member 32 posts Joined Jan 2014 More info | Jul 28, 2014 13:02 | #2 Overall it's an ok picture, I'm not a fan of the composition. I do love how you made sure that you can see the spark in her eyes, very important!
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Jul 28, 2014 13:31 | #3 Thank you so much for your feedback, I really appreciate it. I didn't even realise that her chin was hidden until you said! I will take your advice and keep it in mind for future shots - I am certain they will help me become better as I go on! Armando Diva wrote in post #17061772 Overall it's an ok picture, I'm not a fan of the composition. I do love how you made sure that you can see the spark in her eyes, very important! Here's some advice: - Make sure her expression is more relaxed. - Capture emotions! - Make sure that a part of her chin is not hidden by the dress. - The background is disturbing to me. Welcome to the amazing world of photography, have fun exploring it, learning and creating beautiful images!
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Aug 10, 2014 07:29 | #4 I have taken a few more pics. Learning all the time and still have a LOT of work to be better at composition, but I will share these here anyway. Again, any constructive critisicm is welcomed.  Maia Smiling by grahameys, on Flickr Maia by grahameys, on Flickr Maia by grahameys, on Flickr Maia by grahameys, on FlickrG.
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Point-n-shoot-n Goldmember 2,037 posts Likes: 1127 Joined Jun 2008 Location: Tampa, Florida More info | Aug 14, 2014 21:26 | #5 The second batch is a nice improvement! You did a good job of blurring the backgrounds and the exposures look better as well. Keep on practicing and you will keep on getting better! Canon 5D mk IV, Canon 5D mk iii, Canon 5d classic, Rebel XTI 400D 18-55 kit lens, Canon EF 85mm 1:1.8, Canon EF 17-40 F4L, Quantaray 70-300 1:4-5.6 LD, Canon 70-200 F2.8 iiL, Canon EF135 F2 L, Canon 200 F2 L, Tamron 28-75 1:2.8 , 2 alien bee 800's, 430 EXii, 580 EXii, rectangular and octo softboxes, assorted umbrellas, portable backdrops, radio triggers and still adding.............
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reefvilla Goldmember  More info | Aug 20, 2014 12:30 | #6 grahameys wrote in post #17087128 Maia by grahameys, on FlickrG. I love this last picture. It looks like the sun was behind her and you used an off camera flash that was too her left. It looks like the flash was placed a little low looking at the shadow it cast...Try a little higher and maybe a little less flash so you get fill light but soften the shadow some!?! -----------Canon EOS R -----------
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