First wedding ever - CC please

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Pixil Studio wrote in post #17074571
well where is that pic that the one i want to see

texkam wrote in post #17074608
^ !

Unfortunately, several of us (including me) saw the topper slowly starting to fall so we all went to save it but was too late so I did not get a picture of it.

Great shots some good advice but even with all the advice I would say shoot more having a variation of choices is always good. I feel my pain on editing which I dont really do. I once removed a blemish that was a birthmark and immediately the father of the client noticed and wanted the natural shots. Editing is key these days for a lot of people. I ran into a photographer at beach shoot that explained he has been shooting for over 40 years and he is learning and trying new methods shots and just different things testing the waters so he called it. He also said you never stop learning and the day you think you mastered it all is when you're just screwed yourself up royally.

#3, Im not sure what it is, something is not working for me, but thats subjective. #11 looks it was shot at a corner of a building. I would have preferred a flat background or some tall bushes, etc. As some others have said, the background in a few photos have some distracting light/bokeh, even if you use a lower DOF, the light doesnt fall right.

#12 I like, #10, I like the way the subjects are setup, but again, distracting background. #14, I like, wouldve liked better if it was squared on. (perpendicular to subject and wall)

Overall, I like them. Im not a professional by any means, just a hobby for me so please take my CC with a gain of salt.

Nice series for your first. #4 is really odd...

Pixil Studio wrote in post #17074571
well where is that pic that the one i want to see

Me too! It's moments like that that can make some great memories and bring a smile and some laughter to the couple as they look back on their photos years from now and show their kids.

Not bad overall. A little noisy, especially the ceremony shots, from high ISO but probably not much you could do about that.