Lou

I did this shoot with Lou, and would like to have feedback on it. Thanks!

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overall i like them i would cut the head room out in the 3/4 shots

I am kind of liking the harsh more grunge look of the first 5. The symmetry in those also makes for a strong pose.To go with the feel of the poses, i would like to see more attitude in her expression.

6-8 i don't really care for. The light just seems strange, perhaps a grid on the flash would have done it for me. Also the fore shortening of the lower angle and the foot closest to the camera bothers me.Perhaps even if it was taken a little earlier with a little more ambient light, or even a slower shutter to pick up on the light, since the flash will light/freeze your subject any way.

I am curious to see what others have to say.

8 is my favorite, maybe the light is a little harsh but I enjoy the drama and the BW conversion.

The disappearance of her foot in the shadows in 6 and 7 and as said previously, the distortion of the far foot do bother me.

I also agree on expression, she needs a little more variation. But these are very cool overall.

Pixil Studio wrote in post #17077734
overall i like them i would cut the head room out in the 3/4 shots

Good idea, don’t know why I didn’t think about it myself…. Thanks!

Micro5797 wrote in post #17077742
I am kind of liking the harsh more grunge look of the first 5. The symmetry in those also makes for a strong pose.To go with the feel of the poses, i would like to see more attitude in her expression.

6-8 i don't really care for. The light just seems strange, perhaps a grid on the flash would have done it for me. Also the fore shortening of the lower angle and the foot closest to the camera bothers me.Perhaps even if it was taken a little earlier with a little more ambient light, or even a slower shutter to pick up on the light, since the flash will light/freeze your subject any way.

I am curious to see what others have to say.

Yes, she was lacking a bit of expression, that was her first shoot and she seems like quite a shy girl (though she is the leadsinger of the band!).

We did wait a bit too long for this set of photos, with a bit more natural light we could have had an interesting background. indeed

losangelino wrote in post #17077949
8 is my favorite, maybe the light is a little harsh but I enjoy the drama and the BW conversion.

The disappearance of her foot in the shadows in 6 and 7 and as said previously, the distortion of the far foot do bother me.

I also agree on expression, she needs a little more variation. But these are very cool overall.

Cool, what we wanted to do was some drama looking shoot, so in that I guess it was good !

Thank you for your inputs!