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Aug 19, 2014 13:22 |  #1

C&C Please on PP, posting and lighting. Thanks

I tried to do some split toning please let me know if I over did it. I was hoping it was subtle.

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Aug 19, 2014 14:47 |  #2

Looks good! If I had to nit pick I would say remove the tan line, and the flash is a little too hot so I'd pull it down some to balance it more with the background. But like I said, nit picks not necessity ;)


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Aug 19, 2014 14:55 |  #3

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Looks good! If I had to nit pick I would say remove the tan line, and the flash is a little too hot so I'd pull it down some to balance it more with the background. But like I said, nit picks not necessity ;)

I'm glad you brought up the tan lines bc I have a PP question. In #3 I did not yet clean up the tan lines but in #4 and #5 I did so the question is did I do a good job cleaning them up in #4 and #5 compared to what they would have looked like in #3?


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Aug 19, 2014 16:05 |  #4

Tan lines are awesome IMO




  
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Aug 19, 2014 16:30 |  #5

Leave the tan lines. Very solid set. My only nit pick is that I would like to see the lovely model smile.


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Aug 19, 2014 16:38 |  #6

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Leave the tan lines. Very solid set. My only nit pick is that I would like to see the lovely model smile.

She had braces so she was hesitant to smile but I didn't get some. I'll post one later


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Aug 21, 2014 11:16 |  #7

DanThoman wrote in post #17105998 (external link)
Leave the tan lines. Very solid set. My only nit pick is that I would like to see the lovely model smile.

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Aug 21, 2014 11:36 |  #8

DanThoman wrote in post #17105998 (external link)
Leave the tan lines. Very solid set. My only nit pick is that I would like to see the lovely model smile.

I was having her 'smirk' a lot also

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Aug 21, 2014 12:11 |  #9

Thanks Dthriller. Two more great shots, and yes, she has a beautiful smile.


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Aug 21, 2014 12:21 |  #10

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Thanks Dthriller. Two more great shots, and yes, she has a beautiful smile.

Thank you


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Aug 21, 2014 12:39 |  #11

Nice set! I think the tan lines are a little distracting, but I would leave them in regardless. I think the best one is when she is smiling. Good job!


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Nice set! I think the tan lines are a little distracting, but I would leave them in regardless. I think the best one is when she is smiling. Good job!

I agree for this type of shot they are distracting and if the tone was more cute and fun the tan lines would work. I feel the need to clean them up a bit. Comments on my PP job please.

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Aug 21, 2014 15:34 |  #13

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I agree for this type of shot they are distracting and if the tone was more cute and fun the tan lines would work. I feel the need to clean them up a bit. Comments on my PP job please.

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WIN. Huge fan of this photo.

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Aug 21, 2014 15:41 |  #14

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WIN. Huge fan of this photo.

Let the model know POTN thinks she's awesome ;)

I want submit some to a local fashion mag. Might as well right?


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