First wedding reportage

Here are some results of my first wedding reportage.
More on: http://yannickmeier.de …atharina%20und%​20Jan.html

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Whats going on with number 5?

6 is fantastic

#5: Yes this was not my best work!
I think I have to work on here

I like everything but 5. The added blur isn't done well at all.

Is 5 added blur or Brenizerish?

It's a mix

Thanks for sharing, but very brave of you to share number 5

Brave?

You missed a spot

Actually very good for a first time!

I personally would have recovered some of them, as I find them too "hazy" but im at work on an uncalibrated monitor so idk.

#5 is a whoopsie.

Id have left it alone and not added any blur.

For #5, use an application that can handle the tilt shift effect for you rather than manually doing it by hand.

Good work on your first wedding!

Lips are smooshed in the kissing shots. Have them almost kiss.

Thanks for your feedback