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moondragon Member 199 posts Joined Aug 2005 More info | Feb 18, 2006 20:12 | #1 Be hard on me! HOSTED PHOTO please log in to view hosted photos in full size.
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cristoleyz Member 113 posts Joined Feb 2004 Location: Western NY More info | Feb 18, 2006 20:18 | #2 Hi. I like it! I'm new to this so I really cant give you a good critiqueing (is that a word? LOL) Anyway, from my beginner eyes I notice a hard blue line on the right where the horizon is. Is this from post processing? And the left side of her face looks soft or is that on the lens? The water is fantastic! Looks like she is standing marshmellow fluff or snow! Great! She looks very comfortable too in front of the camera, very pretty girl. Just starting out, in the process of learning. Looking forward to a very rewarding hobby!
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Feb 18, 2006 20:26 | #3 yeah the blue line is me adding a blue filter to make the sky less washed out... the left side of the face is me trying the dodge tool to light up that side of her face -guess I need to try that one again
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cristoleyz Member 113 posts Joined Feb 2004 Location: Western NY More info | What does the original look like? I do think it is a very nice picture though! Did you model like it? Just starting out, in the process of learning. Looking forward to a very rewarding hobby!
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Feb 18, 2006 20:35 | #5 Here's the original untouched...  HOSTED PHOTO please log in to view hosted photos in full size.
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cristoleyz Member 113 posts Joined Feb 2004 Location: Western NY More info | I see what you mean with the shadow on the face. I know nothing about photoshop yet! LOL I hope you get the results your looking for because it's a really nice photo. I'm sure the model will love it when she see it! Just starting out, in the process of learning. Looking forward to a very rewarding hobby!
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ootsk Goldmember 1,154 posts Likes: 13 Joined Jan 2002 More info | Feb 18, 2006 23:46 | #7 I just selected her face and used the IMAGE>adjustments>shadow/highlight on CS2  HOSTED PHOTO please log in to view hosted photos in full size.
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Feb 19, 2006 00:23 | #8 Okay did a little more work with the Shadow/Highlights in CS2 on the face...  HOSTED PHOTO please log in to view hosted photos in full size.
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cristoleyz Member 113 posts Joined Feb 2004 Location: Western NY More info | This looks good Moondragon! The softness is gone on the left side of the face and her features are much more distinguishable. I think you got it! Great job! Just starting out, in the process of learning. Looking forward to a very rewarding hobby!
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Titus213 Cream of the Crop  More info | Feb 19, 2006 01:51 | #10 Nice photo. Color, light, focus seem to be good. I do find the positioning of her legs bothersome, particularly her right leg. She doesn't really look stable. It presents an awkward angle to the camera IMO. Dave
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DayHawk Senior Member  891 posts Joined Oct 2005 Location: Denmark More info | Feb 19, 2006 04:08 | #11 Here is my go at it, I hope you like it, if you do and you want me to take a look at some at the originals, send me an email on nick@nphoto.dk  HOSTED PHOTO please log in to view hosted photos in full size. Canon xt rebel 350D
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