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Mt. Rainier sunrise from Mt. Ararat

 
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Oct 10, 2014 16:06 |  #31

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=he's gone;17170600]The most important thing to remember for shots like this is "Hyperfocal Distance" This rule says that there is a point where focusing further away does not gain any additional sharpness in the items furthest from the camera.

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so if you focus at 10 feet you get everything from 3.85 feet to infinity in "acceptable focus".

I am personally not using hyperfocal distance, as "acceptable focus" isn't "perfect focus" and a calculator won't know what I personally deem acceptable for any type of shot. I've seem experiments online which showed that objects at infinity, such as street signs etc, are not as sharp when using hyperfocal distance as they would be if the lens was focused at the proper distance.

So, use with care. In this case I'd have focused on the mountain to get as much detail out of it as possible.


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Oct 10, 2014 23:42 |  #32

Brandon, I think you did very well overall. I like your composition, it's a classic example of "the rule of thirds", and I like your placement of the sun in the shot. I wish the sun was SLIGHTLY more to the left, but it looks as if you had moved over slightly to the right, (which would have shifted the sun more to the left in the frame), then you would have sacrificed your balanced composition because then you would have cut off more of the left side of the mountain, plus you would have lost those two pine trees on the left side-which I actually like a lot. Now, here's what I recommend for next time.

#1. I know it's been mentioned more than once, but definitely get yourself a light-weight tripod (I highly recommend one made out of carbon fiber) and most importantly, USE it.

#2. Get a shutter release cable.

#3. After you set up your shot (pick your location, compose the shot, etc.), pick your focal point. I would focus on the foreground for this particular shot and here's why. The mountain is the "focal point" of the overall picture because it's basically a massive rock, but rock has a lot of details that you can bring out just by adjusting your contrast slider. The flowers on the other hand are closest to you, and while you can help them look more in focus with the contrast slider, it's not the same as if you had focused on them to begin with. I probably didn't explain that well but I think you could NOT focus on the mountain and yet bring out enough details with your contrast that no one would know that you didn't focus on it, but it's more obvious with the flowers that they weren't in focus to begin with. Okay, so next, after picking your focal point (lets just say you chose the grouping of pink flowers on the right hand side in this case because it will also be easier to tell if they are in focus or not than a mountain that's quite a distance away), here's how I recommend you ensure that your focal point is actually in focus. FYI, I just learned this trick about 6 months ago and I wish I had learned it a few years ago instead. First, switch your camera into "live view" mode, (I know, a lot of photographers never use it, I was one of them until I learned this trick) then move your focal selection box over those flowers. Once you've done that, use the magnifying glass button to zoom in (just like you would if you were viewing a picture you had taken and wanted to zoom into the shot), once you've got a close up of the flower, turn off the auto focus on your lens and flip it to manual, then manually adjust the focus until that grouping of flowers is perfectly sharp. From there you just zoom back out of the close up and you're ready to take your picture-which you now know for sure will be perfectly sharp!

Good luck and keep shooting! You've definitely got a good eye. :)


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Oct 11, 2014 14:17 |  #33

Amber - thank you for the tips and compliment on the shot, I appreciate it. Definately learned some lessons from this thread. I can't wait to put them to use :)

I plan on getting a pretty decent light weight tripod here in the next couple of months, can't wait!


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Dec 02, 2014 18:11 |  #34

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Here's my edit based off the recommendations for adding some contrast to the mountain (thanks ejenner). I also did a little sharpening but decided to pull it back some because I liked it a little softer.

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Outstanding photo!


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Dec 02, 2014 19:01 as a reply to  @ sharod's post |  #35

I like it!! Excellent composition.




  
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Dec 02, 2014 19:10 |  #36

Beautiful shot! I wish I got to see the mountain last time I was there... All I got was fog :/




  
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Dec 03, 2014 08:42 as a reply to  @ lianweijun086's post |  #37

Thanks for the compliments, appreciate it!

lianweijun086 - yes, I know what you mean, I've been up a couple times and have seen the weather change so fast up there - two people could go the same day and have totally different experiences. This was my first backpacking trip and I feel extremely lucky with the weather we got!


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Dec 03, 2014 11:43 |  #38

Amazing shot!




  
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Dec 05, 2014 10:05 |  #39

This makes me want to make this trip, great shot!




  
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Dec 07, 2014 23:52 |  #40

I like the latest edit. The added contrast to the mountain adds depth to the photo!


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Dec 07, 2014 23:58 |  #41

That's a fantastic photo... especially being handheld. Bravo!
Would love to see more.


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Dec 08, 2014 09:40 as a reply to  @ FarmerTed1971's post |  #42

Thanks guys!

FarmerTed - there are a few more at my Zenfolio page (linked off my name, below) they are arranged by date taken, so you'll be able to find the Mt. Rainier stuff.


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Dec 08, 2014 09:46 |  #43

very nice photo, well composed


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