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Oct 16, 2014 21:24 | #1 IMAGE LINK: https://www.flickr.com …77380157@N06/15529607786/ 20140926-DSC01231_v1 1 Critique welcome Ex-Canon shooter. Now Sony Nex.
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joedlh Cream of the Crop 5,511 posts Gallery: 52 photos Likes: 684 Joined Dec 2007 Location: Long Island, NY, N. America, Sol III, Orion Spur, Milky Way, Local Group, Virgo Cluster, Laniakea. More info | Oct 17, 2014 07:57 | #2 Nice shot. See how you like it with the rock on the right cropped out. It sort of draws the eye away from the bridge. The one on the left is okay. Joe
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Oct 17, 2014 08:11 | #3 Thanks. I did try that and somehow it looked empty. I will post it when I get home. Ex-Canon shooter. Now Sony Nex.
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rc9999 Member 62 posts Likes: 5 Joined Sep 2010 More info | Oct 17, 2014 11:19 | #4 What a beautiful scene! I could be wrong, but is the horizon slightly tilted to the left? Rob
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Numenorean Cream of the Crop 5,013 posts Likes: 28 Joined Feb 2011 More info | Oct 17, 2014 11:32 | #5 Not a very interesting scene. The color looks off and possibly oversharpened or overprocessed. Your subject is too small in the frame and the rest of the shot is mostly negative space essentially. I'm more drawn to the rock in the lower left than anything and that shouldn't be a focal point. Try filling the frame more with your subject.
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Tyler285 Member 70 posts Joined Jul 2013 More info | Oct 18, 2014 20:35 | #6 nice image. what kind of post processing did you do?
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Oct 18, 2014 23:50 | #7 Levels, shadows ( the original was rather dark), clarity brush on the bridge, vibrance up to 17 then desaturated water a bit, noise brush on the sky. Ex-Canon shooter. Now Sony Nex.
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cpam.pix Goldmember 1,275 posts Likes: 10 Joined Apr 2011 More info | Oct 19, 2014 17:35 | #8 I like the way the sunlight plays with its warming effect off the bridge. 1D-III with stuff to stick on it:
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Oct 20, 2014 09:49 | #9 Thank you, will try cropping more. I kind of like seeing a lot of sky, makes it less about the bridge and more about the scenery. 20140926-DSC01227 Ex-Canon shooter. Now Sony Nex.
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