Does this work?

This is from a daytime wedding (reception started at 1:00), and I really liked the big window on the edge of the dance floor for a nice silhouette. However, the couple decided to dance all the way over to the side just in front of the DJ, so to get the silhouette I had to shoot the angle. Their 3 year old flower girl daughter was also dancing with the ring bearer, so I wanted to capture that too.

So, does this work? I posted the unedited pre-shot in another thread about aunt betty's (whom I quickly cloned out in this version):

Works for me.

Works very well.

Bill.

looks good to me. I actually think the angle makes it more interesting.

OK, thanks. It was suggested in the other thread that I cull this shot, but I will keep it.

Yep, I dig it. And I bet they'll love it.