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Oct 19, 2014 21:51 |  #1

Looking for some CC on a recent portrait shoot. I feel like these really turned out well. Anything that I could do better?

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Oct 19, 2014 22:00 |  #2

number one is nice facial expression but the crop is bit to tight,looks odd to have a hand in the photo but only half the arm its attached to,the others look out of focus or soft,was that your plan for those ones,as mentioned number one is nice though


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Oct 19, 2014 22:06 |  #3

The bottom two nedd to be cropped differently. The lower part of her body dtivks out at an unflattering angle,.




  
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Oct 20, 2014 00:12 |  #4

gonzogolf wrote in post #17222355 (external link)
The bottom two nedd to be cropped differently. The lower part of her body dtivks out at an unflattering angle,.

Yes, I agree. That angle and framing make her posterior look enormous. Otherwise I really like the look you've achieved here. The first image is particularly nice, and I like the tighter framing (except for the way her arm and hand are cut off, lengthwise - that is a little awkward).


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Oct 20, 2014 01:00 |  #5

Thanks for the advice, everyone! I hadn't even noticed the angle on the lower portion of her body. A tighter crop will fix that. Lots of things to learn! Thanks so much!


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