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Oct 20, 2014 21:47 | #1 What is your input on this image? Image hosted by forum (697826) © mdaddyrabbit [SHARE LINK] THIS IS A LOW QUALITY PREVIEW. Please log in to see the good quality stuff. Website
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gonzogolf dumb remark memorialized More info | Oct 20, 2014 22:02 | #2 I would crop it a bit tighter. And maybe warm up the background just a bit but overall its a very nice image.
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Oct 20, 2014 22:32 | #3 At first glance I liked it quite a bit, but once I looked at it for a few seconds longer, it looks like the family was photoshopped onto the background. I'm guessing maybe you made a layer and blurred the background, but it looks a little too obvious for me. I do like the background itself and the concept you were going for though. All that said, it's just my opinion. FYI: "Fitness Freak" is also known as "Amber" outside of POTN.
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PhotosGuy Cream of the Crop, R.I.P. More info | Oct 20, 2014 22:36 | #4 They look pretty good, but the grass under their legs looks way too sharp. FrankC - 20D, RAW, Manual everything...
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beano Goldmember 4,168 posts Likes: 7 Joined May 2006 Location: Berkshire. UK More info | Oct 21, 2014 05:58 | #5 They also have a blurry halo around them. Try and keep the grass sharp along the focal plane too. I think you're really close here, just need a little more work. Scott
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Naturalist Adrift on a lonely vast sea 5,768 posts Likes: 1250 Joined May 2007 More info | Oct 21, 2014 06:42 | #6 Good initial look but then a few seconds later I notice "Ghosting" around them. What happened?
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Oct 21, 2014 07:46 | #7 I didn't have my settings right in camera so my background was not blurry. I tried to do that after the fact! Website
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Numenorean Cream of the Crop 5,013 posts Likes: 28 Joined Feb 2011 More info | Oct 21, 2014 09:11 | #8 mdaddyrabbit wrote in post #17224898 I didn't have my settings right in camera so my background was not blurry. I tried to do that after the fact! You can tell on the grass between the legs.
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Oct 21, 2014 09:48 | #9 A more natural blur is possible by creating a separate layer of the background (mask out the people), blur it, then fill its layer mask with a graduated filter from bottom to top black to white. Then the blur will become progressively increased from the start to the top of the filter range. -- Image Editing OK --
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Oct 21, 2014 09:54 | #10 mdaddyrabbit wrote in post #17224898 I didn't have my settings right in camera so my background was not blurry. I tried to do that after the fact! Well that's exactly what it looks like. Try Qbx method for adding a more natural blur. I come here for your expert opinion. Please do not hesitate to critique or edit.
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Hannya Goldmember 1,062 posts Likes: 66 Joined Apr 2008 Location: UK More info | Oct 21, 2014 13:12 | #11 Potentially a nice pic except that bright sky shape top centre distracts. Its always tricky trying to fake background blur. If you can be bothered, select the group and some of the foreground and copy to another layer. Then dup the background and use lens blur, but not too heavy. Then use a grad layer mask to blend the foreground with the new blurred background. Then put the group on top and 'slightly' transform to enlarge to cover the spread of the blur from the background. Either that, or cut them out, then use content aware to fill the void. Do it properly in camera next time. Saves a massive amount of pfaffing around .... “Your first 10,000 photographs are your worst.” ― Henri Cartier-Bresson
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MartinDixon Slit-scan project master More info | Oct 21, 2014 13:52 | #12 This shallow DOF is a good look to go for, but it is near impossible to recreate properly in PP, I know I've tried! Do you have a fast (f/2.8 or less) lens? It takes more effort to learn to use, but the results are often gorgeous. flickr
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randizzle Member 76 posts Likes: 12 Joined Feb 2009 Location: Minnesota More info | Oct 22, 2014 08:12 | #14 The first spot I noticed was between the man's shoulder and the woman's hair. Then I noticed the same thing in between all of their legs. What does the original look like?
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MartinDixon Slit-scan project master More info | Oct 22, 2014 08:55 | #15 mdaddyrabbit wrote in post #17226190 I shot this with a Canon 60D and a Sigma 17-70mm 2.8 IS
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