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Oct 23, 2014 21:15 |  #1

Some constructive advice on this image please.

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Oct 23, 2014 21:29 |  #2

Left hand is too big in relation to head. Shooting from farther back, you'd get more realistic proportions. Choice of lenses may also minimize the distortion of sizes of body parts at different distances from lens; others can advise you better than I about that.

I like the natural background and placement and pose of the subject. Foot cut off--some will deduct points for this.


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Oct 23, 2014 21:56 |  #3

I agree, wide angle lenses aren't the best choice for portrait. You could crop some of the sky off, & clone weedzilla at the right.


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Oct 23, 2014 22:54 |  #4

Great background!
Need to improve framing...Would have been better to get down to his level to capture his full body and would allow cutting off some of the sky....if anything is cropped/out of frame, it should be the barrel.




  
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Oct 24, 2014 01:06 |  #5

The above, plus rotate the weapon so we can see it better.




  
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Oct 24, 2014 07:02 |  #6

Thanks for the input.


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Oct 28, 2014 00:13 |  #7

PhotosGuy wrote in post #17230116 (external link)
I agree, wide angle lenses aren't the best choice for portrait.

I just remembered this one shot years ago on film. It even has a weedzilla in it! ;D

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