David & Sierra - CC Welcome

Here are a few from a wedding a few weeks ago. Getting ready to deliver their finals tonight. As always, CC is welcome.

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1) Seems under exposed and a tad warm. Not really a fan of the rear shoe placement. The sole of the rear shoe is the main focus in the image.

2) The horizon cutting through their head does nothing for this. The background is very bland for the pose. A more interesting background would have been better here.

3) Again the horizon cutting through their heads isn't ideal. You really needed to be higher or lower when shooting this. Looks on the cold side with the skin tending to grey.

4) Would have been better if the groom was looking to the camera and the others not... or all looking at the camera. Also the point in the stride 3 of them are at makes them look a little odd. The far left and second from the right are at a good point in the stride... not so much the others.

Love these shots great images. The only crittique is the last one of the grooms looks a little washed out.

I would agree with the critique given. Critique made me second look at the pics, originally loved the shoes until the obvious about the sole showing was pointed out. Small improvements would make huge impact.

memoriesoftomorrow wrote in post #17252178
1) Seems under exposed and a tad warm. Not really a fan of the rear shoe placement. The sole of the rear shoe is the main focus in the image.

2) The horizon cutting through their head does nothing for this. The background is very bland for the pose. A more interesting background would have been better here.

3) Again the horizon cutting through their heads isn't ideal. You really needed to be higher or lower when shooting this. Looks on the cold side with the skin tending to grey.

4) Would have been better if the groom was looking to the camera and the others not... or all looking at the camera. Also the point in the stride 3 of them are at makes them look a little odd. The far left and second from the right are at a good point in the stride... not so much the others.

I appreciate the CC - thanks!

urbanfreestyle wrote in post #17252336
Love these shots great images. The only crittique is the last one of the grooms looks a little washed out.

Thanks! I intentionally washed that image out however for more of a matte look.

CanongLass wrote in post #17252996
I would agree with the critique given. Critique made me second look at the pics, originally loved the shoes until the obvious about the sole showing was pointed out. Small improvements would make huge impact.

I appreciate it!

Love all your wedding shots. Great work!

Thank you!

Awesome pics, keep it up!