Spa Brochoure

Hi all

I had a spa photoshoot a while ago. I took the photos also tried to design the brochure.. It is my first attempt, what do you think? Any C&C is much appreciated.

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Honestly, I can't tell what it is so it looks a tiny bit creepy to me. I like the rest of it though!

Diane

Agree. I can't really tell what it is. Almost looks like a snake.

The logo is already set, as for the image it is the back with oil and water this is the cover and I will post below the images that will be on the other side and explaining the services. Those will be more clear that it is a spa

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Nice lighting!

BrandonSi wrote in post #17272111
Nice lighting!

Thank you.. I mainly used elenchromes but for some shots I used continuous light to be able to capture the candles light too..

Agreed, Very Nice lighting. Though, the OP looks like an arm pit to me. Not very appealing for a brochure.

Thank you..

Well done

Nice job. I guess I'm in the minority. I liked the first shot. First impression to me was the small of a back.

Agree with most here, cover for brochure should be warm and inviting for a spa. Not black and white and abstract.

Love the lighting and composition of the photo with the stones, that one caught my eye!

Great photography. But sweaty backs down to the buttocks say "erotic massage" more than "spa.". Would a mother saying that say, "I think my and daughter and I should god there."?