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Nov 15, 2014 19:50 |  #1

This photo taken during dusk. across the lake power plant.
Let me know suggestions and comments.

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Nov 16, 2014 10:54 |  #2

Nicely done. The second is an improvement. I would think about getting rid of the star (planet?) trails, or at least turning them into single points. See how you like it without the tree on the right.


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Nov 16, 2014 11:36 |  #3

pnauduri05 wrote in post #17274159 (external link)
This photo taken during dusk. across the lake power plant.
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thanks for the suggestions. I will do it and see how it looks. also i try to remove star trails.

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Nov 16, 2014 22:26 |  #4

pnauduri05 wrote in post #17275137 (external link)
thanks for the suggestions. I will do it and see how it looks. also i try to remove star trails.

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Hi I have removed that star trails and trees from right side. Also I have change the WB to blue, which i feel will be more interesting.


Let me know your comments.

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Nov 16, 2014 22:30 |  #5

I think your second image is spot on for composition and color. The horizon is not in the middle like in the first image. Remove the star trails and branch and I think you have a wall hanger.




  
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Nov 17, 2014 11:43 |  #6

What are you using to process your image? The one thing that happened on that last posted image is a lot of noise has shown up in the sky. Depending on what you use, you could try to do some noise reduction only in the sky to alleviate some of spotiness. But it all depends on what you use.


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Nov 17, 2014 17:09 |  #7

I think the 2nd image looks great (minus the star trails)!


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Nov 17, 2014 19:28 |  #8

I agree with sirquack, the post processing that was done to create the desirable "blue sky" introduced too much noise into the image.

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Nov 17, 2014 20:45 |  #9

skidzam wrote in post #17278263 (external link)
I agree with sirquack, the post processing that was done to create the desirable "blue sky" introduced too much noise into the image.

http://petapixel.com …hour-blue-hour-twilights/ (external link)

Hi guys thanks for your very valuable comments. I edited the 2 images and removed the tree and star trails.

I am still wondering why the noise appeared when i try to make the sky blue in lightroom?

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