Viky II

More from Viky!
More on: http://yannickmeier.de​/Galerien/Viky.html

No one has something to say?

I clicked on your link to look at the other pics before commenting. I like the overall look, especially the colors of the set. The one photo I really didn't care for of course is the one you posted due to the position of the railing in the shot. Rather than lead the eye to the subject, it looks like some cone shaped object the model is leaning against.

I liked the others in your link better and I think you nailed the colors, lighting and poses overall.

ok, thanks for your feedback

Hi, I agree with the above poster - I love the other ones, the leading line in the one you posted is distracting - The others are beautiful - love the poses and the post processing.

diane

The only shot I like is the first one. The others have too much distraction in the backgrounds.
The one you posted isn't working and the line on her right leg is another distraction, besides the
obnoxious railing gag :O) I would also zip her pocket closed. It's another distraction.

The PP is okay, but kinda dated and not something that really adds anything to the images, IMO.
The model is lovely, but the posing isn't rocking it for me. Sorry, just answering your request.

drdiesel1 wrote in post #17296056
I would also zip her pocket closed. It's another distraction.

. . . because the zipper tab is so shiny. If the tab didn't happen to be at an angle that reflected so much light, the open pocket would be less conspicuous.

Awesome pictures, for this particular image have you considered cropping the red car from the pic?

OhLook wrote in post #17298738
. . . because the zipper tab is so shiny. If the tab didn't happen to be at an angle that reflected so much light, the open pocket would be less conspicuous.

Yes it would and those are the details being missed. Kinda like that big RED car too
I'm not trying to pick on him. I think these are nice, but I am trying to get him to learn a few things too.

It's why were all here Shooting a beautiful woman makes things a lot easier than a not so attractive woman.
With that in mind, you should be able to focus on more of the details than trying to make someone look beautiful,
that's not quite so beautiful.

First of all: Thank you all for your feedback

@drdiesel: You don't have to apologize for giving me some useful tips
"Shooting a beautiful woman makes things a lot easier than a not so attractive woman" -> OOOOH YES it is And it's not only her beauty, it's more here experience in front of the camera! It's realy a big difference to people who don't have that....she is pretty amazing! Beautiful AND has experience!


@Canonglass: Yes, I thinked about it. But then I said to me: No, I won't crop it because this would be a "dirty" issue AND it realy fits to Freiburg

Ribery-7

I can say first of all that I am in no way an expert on portraiture, so I offer my comments with humility, and not in any way to detract from what others have said about your photos of Viky. She is so stunningly beautiful and your processing of your photos does such a remarkable job of directing me and my eyes directly to her face. Indeed, I did not even notice the "railing," nor did I even notice the "zipper" and I think that is so because of how inviting her facial structure is, especially her eyes. The last picture of her on your link is for me the most powerful of all. Please post more. anthony

Beautiful work!:

Thanks guys