First Go at This

So I decide to take these to lovey sisters out and get in my 1st real practice. Please feel free to let me know what you think and what I can correct.

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I like the first three, i would be happy with them. They look comfortable and relaxed.
The fourth looks stressed or forced in body and hands, not face.

The eyes are over processed (overly white) especially in the first pic.

Be careful about cutting off fingers. If the hand is showing, it needs all of the digits. Closed hands show stress.

Keep in mind that this is a sharing section. there is also a critique section in the forums.

Looks a bit over sharpened.

I like the composition in the first two. I agree with previous comments on over whitening teeth and eyes, and over sharpening.

Thanks everyone, I will post over there.

great work

nice set