Trying a new edit

I have been looking more towards a vintage "old school look." I would love some feedback on how it looks, and what to improve.

Thanks a ton...

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I think you were successful at making snapshots look like they were stored for years in a shoe box under grandma's bed. Apart from the question, why, you might consider working on composition for the next batch. In this regard, the best one in my opinion is the one of the girl leaning over the counter. It tells a story, with the two subjects interacting. I would think about cropping a little on the left. Would be good to get more of her face.

Thanks joe. I'll go back and play with the edit.