Mirjana

Mirjana Davidovac - Schoolgirl ballet school

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I would like to have seen them shot at 200mm.

I think the first one would have benefited from shooting more to your left. Using the treeline as a contrasting backdrop.

Quite a stunning girl

Third one is the charm.

First and third. The second one is no flattering to her.

I like the third one the most

If you had shot the second one in the middle of the fence rather than by a post, the arch of her back would be much more legible, since her leotard matches the black of the pole.

Although you have a good model and decent shots here, the potential for a better result is available.

Each shot has the background in focus or only slightly blurred.

Shoot with your 200mm lens and watch how she becomes so much more the centre of attention. Those background distractions will disappear (example - #3 the playground equipment behind her).

I agree with someone on top who said that longer lens would be much better choice. Separates background and your subject.

Beautiful young lady but I'm not sure I like any of the images. Third is probably best with a fun pose but even that has a little too much background. Perhaps decreasing DOF would help. You captured the model well though.