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Feb 18, 2015 16:00 |  #1

This will be my first posting. Would appreciate any feedback. Thanks in advance.


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Feb 18, 2015 23:00 |  #2

Welcome to POTN!

That's a pretty dramatic piece of sky. The vivid colours lend the image some energy.

Your foreground doesn't really work for me - tops of trees don't really add much to the composition - I suggest that you should look to include the whole trees, even if there is only a sliver of ground visible - or leave them out entirely for a cloudscape.


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Feb 18, 2015 23:08 |  #3

Welcome to POTN! I agree with Damien on the foreground. The sky is really fiery! Lovely!


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Feb 19, 2015 09:01 as a reply to  @ itsallart's post |  #4

Thank you very much for the feedback. I left the treetops in the composition as a perspective on how much of the sky was covered by the fiery clouds. I couldn't include the whole tree because of some ugly power lines that were traversing the parking lot from where I was shooting. If there is a next time, I shall choose a better shooting location to include the whole tree.


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