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Working on lighting, would love some C&C

 
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Mar 09, 2015 13:52 |  #1

So I've been hitting the studio working on my lighting. This is just one of the many shots I got yesterday morning. I haven't edited or done any retouching yet. Thoughts on this shot would be appreciated!

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One alien bee 800 w/beauty dish and 30º honeycomb grid

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Mar 09, 2015 14:36 |  #2

Looks good to me, as far as lighting is concerned. Would be nice to see a tighter crop, have her fix her hair, and make up touch up the make up. Lighting is good IMO.


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Mar 09, 2015 14:56 |  #3

Make-up is what I think lets the photo down- model's face is too pale compared to her shoulders.
Otherwise good lighting


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Mar 10, 2015 10:29 |  #4

Here is a cropped version.

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