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Feb 26, 2006 22:26 |  #1

Just looking for some feedback on these 2 shots.....shots taken with my new Sigma 10-20mm lens.
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http://www.pbase.com/r​osco1971/image/5657893​5 (external link)


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Feb 26, 2006 22:42 |  #2

Not really much to critique...I think they are both strong compostionally, but I think the first is more dramatic. The people on the bridge bug me a little though. I would like it more with them either gone or if they were adding some dynamic to the image.


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Feb 26, 2006 22:57 |  #3

I agree. No C&C really needed. Bridges seem to be a popular subject with these lenses. Gee! Was the sky really that blue?

I guess the only criticism I can offer is that you've now made me want one of these lenses:-(



  
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Feb 27, 2006 15:32 |  #4

Great shots! Love the composition, and you've chosen the perfect time of day to shoot- sky is really nice colour. Nothing but kudos here.


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Feb 28, 2006 11:25 |  #5

Great shots, but I can´t stop thinking the first one as a poster, cropped from where the building starts.


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Feb 28, 2006 13:41 |  #6

nice :)

My only comment on the first one is that everything lines up until the bottom where you're off centre which throws off the balance for me.


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