First editorial shoot, CC welcome!

Hello everyone,
We recently had an editorial meet-up here in my city. Basically everyone (designers, models, MUAs, photographers) volunteered their time and talent to hold a photo shoot. This was my first time doing an editorial style shoot so I would greatly appreciate any critiques, like with composition or post-processing. Thank you for looking!

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Looking good, but mellow out on the sharpness. A bit much IMO

Thank you! And I think the over-sharpening may be Flickr's fault? I know it sharpens pictures when they're not the original size, but I'll keep that in mind.

It looks like the clarity/sharpness is too high and the first picture needs some beauty retouching. There's some weird shadows going on in the chin but overall it looks great