Audrey

I was able to set up a shoot with a model I met at last season's Kansas City Fashion Week. Audrey was great to work with and made my job quite a bit easier (this is my second full shoot and I'm still very much learning the ropes). We were able to work in a few different looks and locations. Constructive C&C are welcome, because I have 2 shoots next weekend and want to make sure I'm always improving.

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Your lighting and toning in post are good. The only nitpicks I have would be for your model to have more connection with the camera (at least one shot of her looking at it would be good) and the lines on the wall intersecting at her head and jutting out the bottom of her chin in the last shot look a little weird to me. Oh, and your watermark/logo is a bit big and distracting but to each their own.

Well done though.

Solid stuff. Looking forward to more.

paintedlotus wrote in post #17530280
Your lighting and toning in post are good. The only nitpicks I have would be for your model to have more connection with the camera (at least one shot of her looking at it would be good) and the lines on the wall intersecting at her head and jutting out the bottom of her chin in the last shot look a little weird to me. Oh, and your watermark/logo is a bit big and distracting but to each their own.

Well done though.

Thanks for the input. I do have quite a few with her making eye contact, but the ones posted were much stronger shots overall. Agreed whole-heartedly on the intersecting lines; I should have cloned them out because I wasn't paying attention enough during the shoot to notice when they became an issue.

texkam wrote in post #17530304
Solid stuff. Looking forward to more.

Thanks. I'll probably have some new stuff in a few weeks.

Good start with these. Pay a little attention to the tones in her legs, & especially the "Old persons feet" in #1? ; )

Good catch on the feet. It got quite cold toward the end of the shoot and she's quite pale, so yes I probably should have put more work into taking care of the colour difference in post.

I prefer the B&W .. they look timeless.