JOANA II

And here the next one....out of focus und too long shutterspeed....but the moment counts

Same comments as Joana III. Try a portrait crop and don't cut off her hands. Keep posting, as I said she's lovely.

Thanks Dan

Maybe have her stand a little more off center as well, see the Viky 1 photo

center crop works for portraits but this one doesn't seem like one. I think you should redo the shoot with perhaps a better(cleaner) location and better poses.
I always try to avoid cars in backgrounds. Those don't usually look good. In this photo the building on the left would've been a better background.
I am also unsure about the yellow skin tones.