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May 11, 2015 15:20 |  #1

Aaaand the third one from JOANA :)
Maybe here someone leaves a comment! ;)

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May 11, 2015 15:41 |  #2

Your model is lovely but I just don't like the crop. You seem to like cutting off parts you shouldn't (jmho). I also find the background a bit distracting. The bright part on the upper left draws my eye away from the model.


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May 12, 2015 00:58 |  #3

Thanks for your comment Dan!


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May 12, 2015 11:05 |  #4

agree about the crop, just curious is that a white top? maybe the white balance is slightly off, just thinking, the color does not seem the same as in the other photos




  
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May 13, 2015 06:45 |  #5

your model is definitely a stunner.

I agree w/ the others concerning the crops, they are very non-traditional. If they work for you and her, so be it, to me they don't. Like your work and processing, framing not so much. ;)


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May 13, 2015 11:28 |  #6

Beautiful model. But I agree with the cropping criticism.


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May 13, 2015 15:00 |  #7

Agreed on the crop.
on my screen it dosent have any "pop"


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May 13, 2015 19:51 |  #8

Agree with the crop comment. Do you have another copy before any cropping. My opinion is that the hair being cropped is most distracting followed by cropping just past her top.

If the shot was cropped, allow more space and you will probably notice the improvement yourself.




  
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May 14, 2015 09:25 |  #9

I really like this shot. The crop, weirdly, doesn't bother me. I'm not usually a huge fan of funky processing either, but this just works for me on some unexplainable level!?!


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May 16, 2015 11:21 |  #10

really great shot

love the pp


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May 17, 2015 19:03 |  #11

Great shot - I'm sure you can crop it anyway you like. Personally I like images like this where the "rules" are bent a little.


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May 18, 2015 02:59 |  #12

Also in another forum the crop was criticized....but for me it works....
But thanks a lot for your many comments!!!!


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