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May 17, 2015 14:50 |  #1

Hey all, it's been at least a year since I posted my last portraits for C&C, and I'm here again looking for further comments.

These were taken at a senior recital of a friend of mine still at college both before hand and afterward at the reception.

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May 19, 2015 08:45 |  #2

Generally, it looks like you had good coverage of the event, except for #7 which should never see the light of day? ; )


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May 19, 2015 10:57 as a reply to  @ PhotosGuy's post |  #3

Thanks :)

And they're just classmates ;). Her SO and his parents are in the last picture.


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May 22, 2015 22:30 |  #4

Watch your backgrounds, although they are well out of focus, I don't like seeing the square sewer drainage in the background. Also the birch tree in number 2.




  
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May 26, 2015 20:06 |  #5

I'm not crazy about the b&w convertion.

IMO 7 isn't suited as a b&w. I like 8 as a b&w bc it is more of a moment captured but I think it needs a contrast boost.


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May 26, 2015 20:07 as a reply to  @ DThriller's post |  #6

Thanks for the thoughts.

Also Keith, thanks for pointing that out. Not! Now it drives me nuts when I look at it lol. At least I will try to keep a better eye out next time.


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