Feedback on Maternity shoot

First maternity shoot ..would love feed back

Is it too dark?

IMAGE LINK: https://flic.kr/p/teDv​u8

Yeah I would say that you need either another light or a reflector to properly expose the future mom, especially with backlighting.

Could just be the smaller web format, but her face also seems to be lacking sharpness. The focal point seems to be on the wall/window sill instead.

You also might want to clone out the white blob on her pants.

Cheers,

Jeff

Thank you so much for the feed back Jeff! I do see your the POF hit..grr.

(that blob is her warn jean look).

Yes, too dark, her face is too centered (crop top and right side a bit please)

and while you're in there fixing things, i'd clone out the three little spikes from the scarf that are sticking out of her stomach - makes it look like she's got an alien in there! LOL

It is too dark, but could probably be saved.
https://fstoppers.com …elling-their-lights-51206

Keith Sheridan wrote in post #17567488
It is too dark, but could probably be saved.
https://fstoppers.com …elling-their-lights-51206

Thanks for the link!