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May 22, 2015 20:32 |  #1

Let me know what you guys think. Thanks.

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May 22, 2015 20:34 |  #3

I'm not too sure I like this last edit. I might have gone too far on the HDR

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May 22, 2015 22:01 |  #4

The first image doesn't do much for me, but the others are all great. In terms of balance, #1 has a blah bottom left and a blank top right.




  
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May 22, 2015 22:34 |  #5

Here's a more subtle edit that I like more

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May 22, 2015 22:34 |  #6

Keith Sheridan wrote in post #17567459 (external link)
The first image doesn't do much for me, but the others are all great. In terms of balance, #1 has a blah bottom left and a blank top right.

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May 22, 2015 23:23 |  #7

2 to 5 compositions are very nice, but I would do something with the bottom right corner of #4. That big boulder does nothing for the image.
None of the skys are working for me.


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May 22, 2015 23:26 |  #8

Love the vantage point of the last one!


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May 23, 2015 00:17 |  #9

Bianchi wrote in post #17567514 (external link)
2 to 5 compositions are very nice, but I would do something with the bottom right corner of #4. That big boulder does nothing for the image.
None of the skys are working for me.

Thank you. What can I do to fix the skies?




  
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May 23, 2015 00:18 |  #10

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Love the vantage point of the last one!

Thank you. I was about to leave the river and thought I would take one last drive up a road I saw on the way in. It led me to this view. Glad I took it now.




  
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May 23, 2015 07:57 |  #11

Varneeezy wrote in post #17567546 (external link)
Thank you. What can I do to fix the skies?

Short of replacing skies, if you have the pp skills, I would re-shoot , if it's conveniently close to you and the sky is cooperating.. Think morning sunrise, or sunset. or nice daytime clouds with blue skies like #3, although you could of brought more of the blue sky out in #3 on left side.

You have a good eye for composition 2 to 5 are really nice compositions.


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May 23, 2015 10:28 |  #12

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Short of replacing skies, if you have the pp skills, I would re-shoot , if it's conveniently close to you and the sky is cooperating.. Think morning sunrise, or sunset. or nice daytime clouds with blue skies like #3, although you could of brought more of the blue sky out in #3 on left side.

You have a good eye for composition 2 to 5 are really nice compositions.

I did take some shots without the nd filter on, exposing for the sky. But I decided not to photoshop it in. I thought it would look too fake lol. Maybe I'll try it out though. And thank you for the compliment. I'm just following basic rules regarding composition.




  
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