Just a personal preference Alfredo but I'd like to see just a bit more contrast to deepen the shadow a little...and a slight w/b adjustment, at least for how it appears on my monitor.
Here are my quick, subtle adjustments of it as an example.
http://www.ussoriskany.us/Slider/
Gene, very nice. I like your edits. It's weird because in my monitor my shadows and colors were stronger but it's not that way when viewing the image on my iPhone. I'm going to change up the background color workspace in LR CC and PS CC. I read that makes a difference. Colors and tone may appear different when your workspace background is a dark grey vs light grey. Your version has more pop and the yellows in the foreground are stronger.
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