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May 29, 2015 18:32 |  #1

Trying to do composites. Would love any tips or cc on what I could do to it.

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May 30, 2015 05:52 |  #2

I might make the lantern glow a little softer and broader, which would illuminate her a bit more.


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Jun 01, 2015 14:33 |  #3

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I might make the lantern glow a little softer and broader, which would illuminate her a bit more.

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Jun 01, 2015 18:42 |  #4

I like this a lot. Amazing job




  
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Jun 02, 2015 11:31 |  #5

Very interesting image. I also agree with saea501's suggestion.

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Jun 04, 2015 04:55 |  #6

Perhaps I'm wrong, but t looks like the lantern was added in PP? And so makes the image look fake. The lamp is in focus, but the hand holding it seems to be out of the focal plane.


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Jun 04, 2015 05:28 |  #7

Thanks for all the comments.

I did play around with the lantern light and think I got it to look better.

The lantern was not added in PP, just the light. The bracket on the light was broke so it might be hanging slightly off. I think I shot her at f4 even though the exif is showing 200mm at f2. That's for the background layer, which is a stock photo.


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Jun 08, 2015 06:15 as a reply to  @ delta0014's post |  #8

Knww I might be wrong! It does look magical.


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