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Jun 27, 2015 18:45 |  #16

A lovely model; but in the last pose you have too much leg compression which makes her look rather large. Next time have her extend her legs just enough to not squish out her calf and thigh muscles.


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Jun 27, 2015 18:53 |  #17

I 100% agree with you qbx. I just posted that one as a fill flash example. . I didn't even give her that one. I worked this pose more. Is this one better? Thanks for the c and c.

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Jun 27, 2015 23:06 as a reply to  @ DThriller's post |  #18

Oh yes, that is much better. Very nice indeed! I'm sure she will love it.


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Jul 12, 2015 15:05 |  #19

Curious about your grenade/bird watermark/trademark. Is there a story there?


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Jul 12, 2015 16:16 as a reply to  @ golfecho's post |  #20

Not really I just thought it was cool. I don't really use it anymore not that I'm trying to be like a business. I now it seems unprofessional (I never use it for wedding shots). I think I just used it here bc I knew this girl was going to post them publicly and maybe it would seem cool you younger people. What do you think?


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Jul 12, 2015 17:45 |  #21

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Not really I just thought it was cool. I don't really use it anymore not that I'm trying to be like a business. I now it seems unprofessional (I never use it for wedding shots). I think I just used it here bc I knew this girl was going to post them publicly and maybe it would seem cool you younger people. What do you think?

I just wondered about the contrasting images, wondered if there was a story. For a photography business, I just wondered.


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Jul 13, 2015 01:40 |  #22

A couple seem just a bit OOF but that might just be my eyes, nothing crazy soft. Otherwise they might benefit from some white balance/tint adjustments and for the flat lighting, it's not too bad and might be improved with some simple mid-contrast or curves work.


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