Thank you for the critiques everyone! I really appreciate it! Yeah i feel that the vest and the walking one is a bit forced so I'll be sure to take those off my website. I guess that's why the agent didn't choose those! And yes, that really is a bed sheet! It seems to be the "fashion" nowadays to use a semi wrinkly sheet. I saw it on a retailers website and thought it looked pretty cool, but obviously i didn't pull it off as well as they did. They use a specific weight of cloth to achieve a very fine wrinkle.
Also, @SBEECHER,
I'm not exactly sure how to extract the exif, but looking hitting my camera's "info" button it shows that the first one with leafy background was shot at 105mm, F2.8, ISO 400, 1/500.
The ones against the white background were shot at 80mm, F4, ISO 100 1/80. A constant LED light panel was used to give her face a bit of pop and color for those shots.
The first 2 black and white ones were all shot at 100mm, F3.5, ISO 400 1/320.
The 3rd black and white one was shot at 200mm, F2.8 ISO 400, 1/320
The last one was shot 105mm f2.8 ISO 400, 1/500.
Hope that helps, let me know if you have any other questions sbeecher!