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Jul 13, 2015 18:12 |  #1

Processing work on this one? And yes I've opened shadows and prefer it darker :) Trying a few things differently.

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Jul 13, 2015 21:04 |  #2

I like this. Have to struggle a little bit to see the row of bikes on bottom left. Might try to brighten it up just a bit, but not much. But its what you like and that is really all that matters.


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Jul 14, 2015 07:59 |  #3

You didn't ask, but I think the composition could be improved. Overall, it has the look of too much cropping. The first thing that caught my eye was the banner lights. To top part is cut off. The next thing is the woman walking. She could use a little room below her. Also, the bikes on the left are cut off.


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Jul 14, 2015 13:45 |  #4

Thanks for the feedback everyone. Shot fixed 35mm at the last minute so didn't have much time to readjust for composition unfortunately.




  
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Jul 14, 2015 13:51 |  #5

you could probably fix the banner in PS with a bit of cloning, I'd give that a try. Enough lights there to pick from. I'd also lighten up at least the beginning of the alley a bit, it looks very dark on my screen. This could look nice printed!


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