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Mar 02, 2006 22:25 | #1

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Robert_Lay

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Mar 02, 2006 22:33 | #2

Could use a slight rotation clockwise to get the horizon level and it could use a little Image->Adjustments->Shadows/Highlights to bring some detail into the black rocks without blowing out the highlights.
Then in order to get the composition a lilttle more balanced, you could crop out about 1/3rd of the sky.

The excitement and interest of the surf crashing on the rocks will probably carry through as the dominant attention getter, and you will have a real great print.

Congratulations.

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Mar 02, 2006 22:34 | #3

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You can edit any post you make you know. See my other response:

https://photography-on-the.net/forum/showthread.php?t=143613

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beachgirl
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Mar 03, 2006 10:07 as a reply to @ Robert_Lay's post | #4

Robert_Lay wrote:
Could use a slight rotation clockwise to get the horizon level and it could use a little Image->Adjustments->Shadows/Highlights to bring some detail into the black rocks without blowing out the highlights.
Then in order to get the composition a lilttle more balanced, you could crop out about 1/3rd of the sky.

The excitement and interest of the surf crashing on the rocks will probably carry through as the dominant attention getter, and you will have a real great print.

Congratulations.

Thanks for the advice, I don't ever show anyone my shots cuz I figure I'm the only one who likes them. So it means alot that someone else thought it wasn't to bad.

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