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EnglishBob wrote in post #17659276
I prefer the second one, in the first I find the foreground / negative space a little overpowering.

Agreed.

Also, the white balance looks a bit shifted in the first as well.

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EnglishBob wrote in post #17659276
I prefer the second one, in the first I find the foreground / negative space a little overpowering.

yup.

might want to take a look at it after cropping from the bottom right corner up and to the left … keeping the aspect ratio the same.


like the processing on the second. good shots.

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