Is this image suffering from oversharpening?

I am trying to figure out what I did to this image, I am a long time Photoshop user, but just now started dabbling in Lightroom and so far I love it. But I believe I am overdoing something, is it the sharpening that has given this photo the grainy hazy look?

1) Its possible. The bokeh should be smoother. It actually messes with eyes. Some lenses at certain apertures might give a "messy" out of focus area.
2) If it is over sharpened. Try just sharpening focal points, like eyes and such.
3) If there was slight camera shake, can also be the problem

1. F4 doesn't create the best bokeh
2. I will try this
3. Shouldn't 1/400 at 120mm eliminate most camera shake?

i think its just the way the ocean was moving.

To me it looks very contrasty.

Between the contrast, the saturation, and the sharpening you've slightly overcooked it. I think just easing back a smidge on 2 of the 3 would get you there.

There's a lot of noise in the image, look at the sky, which shouldn't be there really from an ISO 400 shot, so I'd assume too much sharpening somewhere.

Yes. I would hold off on sharpening until your done with Lightroom and do all that stuff in PS where you have full control over it.

The contrast is high, but it doesn't look like any clipping, so I would say that your biggest problem here is under-exposure.

When you sharpened it did you increase the masking. If not, click on the masking slider while holding down the "Alt" key (Windows.) Then move the slider to the right until there is little white in the background type places. That will allow the image to still be sharpened but remove much of the sharpening artifacts that could be causing the image to just not look right.

Nogo wrote in post #17683942
When you sharpened it did you increase the masking. If not, click on the masking slider while holding down the "Alt" key (Windows.) Then move the slider to the right until there is little white in the background type places. That will allow the image to still be sharpened but remove much of the sharpening artifacts that could be causing the image to just not look right.

I will give this a shot, thanks for the reply

It seems the woman is OOF and that is distracting to me.

where is the clarity slider?

Yes I think the saturation and sharpening are both too high

Clarity slider is in Adobe Camera Raw (ACR), a PS plug-in